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 Walter, Captain of divison 8

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PostSubject: Walter, Captain of divison 8   Thu Aug 26, 2010 4:33 pm

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Name: walter
Nickname(s):
Age: 300
Visual Age: 22

Gender: Male
Division:8
Rank:Captain
Sexual Orientation: straight
Height: 5'6
Weight: 160

Body Frame: medium
Blood Type: AB
Sound of Voice: chilling to the bone
Appearance:Walter has long black hair that goes over his eyes. He has a black button sweater vest on him with a black tie on him. the vest is black He has a white long sleave shirt on under the vest and black gloves He has on a dark grey pare of pants and black shoes. He has black eyes and stands at five foot six inches with a weight of 120 pounds. He dose not seem to be very strong but has a lot of power behind him. He has a light bronze tan for his skin color. He does not have any hair on his face. He does not have a six pack or anything on his gut other then a belly button. He is skinny and so are his arms. He does have a very good reflex system so his body helps him counter very fast.
Introvert/Extrovert: Extrover
Hobbies: smoking
Likes and Dislikes: (What does your character like and dislike? At least 5 for each.)

Likes- smoking, reading, hanging out with friends, having nothing to do, fighting

Dislikes-making the first move in a fight, dicks, people who think they are all that, annoying people, being bitch slapped.

Personality: Walter is a very cocky person. He does not really show much respect to his opponents and calls his opponents names. He will not give them a chance to get ready for the fight he will attack them as they speak most of the time if they are taking to long to talk and tell him some random bullshit. He likes to tell people who he is and what he does. He does not like to take no for an answer. He does smoke at times even though he's under age. Even though he acts like that he still would never leave his friends or lie to it. He will protect his friends his is in with his life. He will do as he is told by his higher ups and will do it without asking as long as it is not to do something harmful to his village.

He does not leave his team behind. He will show respect to his team as long as they are on his side. He does seem to take training with 100% of his effort. He dose not hold back when fighting if it would be a fight to the death. He does not hold back because it shows that they have a lot to learn and need to become stronger. But as he grew older he calmed down and is no longer as cocky.

the New Walter is more calm. He does not act cocky unless fighting and is kind to his people. The way he is cocky is by making fun of them and being nice at the same time. He still smokes and does not seem to laugh that much. He does not mind it when people are having a good time and he tries to help out his friends when needed. He likes to avoid fighting even though he likes it because it kills time. He Does not spare people in fights. It's to the death. No more, no less. He will not let anyone go who he's fighting. On rare times he will though

Defining Characteristics: calm
Specialties: reading
Fighting type: Ranged Combatant
History/Background: When Walter was young, he was a fighter. Walter was a run away. He did not live with his mom and dad because he did not like them. He wanted to be on his own. He was around 14 when he left and did not say why. He just left. And that was that. Walter had some skill in making weapons. He made gloves that had wires on them that were very skinny so they had a hard chance of seeing the wires. He was with a group of people in England and would fight off people that would try and kill them. They group was fun and he was never bored. He was skilled and known as The Angel of Death. He was very strong and had more things to add to his blade. Walter was getting stronger each day and better. He was very fast and knows what people were doing. He could move out of the way of all kinds of attacks that the opponents threw at him.

After fighting for a long long time, Walter was now about 60 years old and finaly died once his heart gave out. He woke up and was now young again. He had a chain on his chest and did not care. He was fucking young again. He walked around seeing things known as hollows. He would fight them and it was close but he won. He did not have any weapons until the day he met his Captain. The Captain was helping him fight a hollow. It was weak but Walter did most of the work Because this person wanted to see just how good this person was. Walter killed the hollow and The girl took Walter. He hit the top of his head with her sword and Sent Walter to the soul society.

At the soul society, Walter was in the academy. He had a sword but it was not his. It was just a training sword. It was a real sword like metal but not a zanpaktou. He was well known and liked by a lot of people. He was nice to all of them and they were nice to him back. Though, some people did not like him with no reasoning behind it. Walter did not mind it one bit. he just let things be. He just left his day's go by. He then went to the grounds to find his zanpaktou. He walked all around and then there was someone there. He looked like him, but older. He looked a lot like himself when Walter died. He fought this person who had the weapons that Walter used. He then put his hand out. "Become My Zanpaktou." He said. The man pulled his Hands back and had the wires leave. He then turned into reiatsu and formed into a blade in Walter's hand. He grabbed the blade and looked at it. He placed the sword into it's sheath and walked out. He knew the name of his zanpaktou. It was Ingusu. He Did not let anyone know that he knew the name of his blade. He Just wanted to be known by his members as a normal shinigami getting by like the rest of them. He would fight and use his sword but not shikai. He never used it but he would train with it. He was careful to make sure no one knew he had it yet. Then there was a thing going around that he did have shikai. He would not say that he did but people knew he was lying.

Walter trained day and night and then gained bankai in the training. Still letting no one know he had anything. He started to lose more fights so people would not think he was getting to strong. Then One day they had more trainning going on to see if someone was ready to join a division. Walter had a plan. He Was going to fail it. He did everything wrong and once it came to the fighting, he lost. Walter walked away as if sad but was happy. He sat down and was out side looking at the clouds. "You threw the fight diddent you?" A female voice said. He turned. It was the captain of the 8th division. "No he was better then me." He said looking back at the clouds. The Captain laughed. "Don't joke around. I know how strong you are. You have bankai. I've seen it." She said. Walter's eye twiched as she said she has seen it. He looked at her. "I don't know what your talking about Captain. I don't even have shikai. How could I have a bankai?" He asked. She smiled again. "Well i've seen both." She said. He laughed. "Right." He said and then she spoke once more. "You and a few of your friends have a mission. In the would of the living a few hollows have been seen. You and your friends are going to kill them." She spoke. He sighed and nodded.

Walter got ready with a few friends of his and they went off. They were in the world of the living and found the hollows no problem. He started to fight them off and use his power he had but his team was no use. The hollows over powered them and his friends were being harmed. He was the only one standing. The others were to beaten up from the hollows. "My my these shinigami will be tasty soulds for me and my friends." He said. Walter looked at him. "NO!" He spoke. He then pulled his sword back. "SLICE MY OPPONENTS TO NOTHING, INGUSU!" He screamed and reiatsu started to fly all around from his body and all the hollows stopped. Then the reiatsu stopped flying around and things were calm. Walter's friends looked at him like they just saw god. He had no weapon in his hand but two gloves now. The hollows laughed. "What are you going to kill us with? Your ha-" Before the hollow could finishi his sentence, his head was cut clean off. The other hollows looked at his head hit the ground along with his body then looked back at Walter. He was in between them and wires were flying around. The hollows were cut open from every point in the body. He was then standing there as his team started to stand back up. "W-Walter, w-when did you get that power?" One of them asked. Walter looked at him. "I've had it for some time." He said. Then they knew that when people said he had shikai, they were right. After they stopped talking, clapping could be heard. They turned to the sound. It was the captain. "Good job." She said. Walter looked at her. "What the hell? They could have killed us!" He said. She smiled. "but did they?" She asked. Walter looked at his team. "No." He said. "I would have stepped in if that came down to it." The captain spoke. "Your all now part of the 8th division. Walter, your my new second seat." She spoke giving him his bage.

Walter Walked around the soul society with his division members to have a smoke or just a good time. He sat down and watched the clouds roll by with his captain most of the time just to kill the time. Then, The day came. He was walking around the would of the living just him and his captain. They were just having a good time. That was it. Then two hollows came out. Walter went into his shikai to fight his hollow. The Captain's hollow how ever was stronger. It was a Vasto lord. His Captain went into bankai having fire shoot out from all points. Walter took some time with the fight and then killed the hollow. He then looked at his captain smiling. The smile soon left as he saw the hollow stab through the captain. the Captain fell to the ground and blood was comming out of her mouth and gut. Walter ran to her and looked at her. "C-CAPTAIN!" He said. "Are you ok?" He said. She looked at him. "Walter, This... is my end. Y-your going to have to watch out for the 8th division for me." She said and then took the captains robe off. She handed it to Walter as the life left her eyes. "You... Have got stronger sice we met. I'm proud... To have been your Captain...." She spoke and died in his arms. Walter had tears falling down his face. He could not sit there as his captain was in his hands dead. He was hopping he would wake from this nightmare. He then heard the hollow laughing. "Don't worry. Your going to be joining her soon." He said. Walter stood up wipping the tears from his eyes and then put on the Captain's robes. He turned around and the wires started to glow. "BAN-KAI!" He screamed letting out all this reiatsu. It was unreal. The hollow put his arms over his face and a bright light shot from Walter. The light faded and Walter was in a suit of armor. It was wird looking. It had claws on them and he could not be seen. The hollow had no idea was he was seeing then his arms were sliced through and cut off. He then grabbed the hollow by the throught. The only thing that could be seen from what Walter had was the captain's robe. He slammed the hollow to the ground and then put two fingers to his face. "Burn in hell Hollow." He spoke and the claws shot out from his fingers and into his eyes. Walter left bankai and had his sword in his hand. He placed it in his sheath and picked up the body of the captain.

Walter came back to the soul society with his captain in hands and people watched him. They said nothing but watched. He placed the body on a bed and the captain commander was next to him. "I'm sorry for your loss Walter. She was a good captain." He said. Walter said nothing. "Did she say anything to you before she died?" He asked. Walter looked at him. "To take care of the 8th divison for her." He spoke. The man looked at Walter. "Very well then. Your the new captain of the 8th division." He spoke and took the body to put it in her grave.

Role-play Sample:

It was good for his brother to lead so that Walter would know where they were going. Walter was still a little fuzzy with the mission gave to them. He was half asleep when they got it. He spat out the ciggaret for it was not just a butt of it and was going faster. He was now next to his brother. Walter looked at him and passed him. He laughed. Walter turned around and was still jumping on a branch looking at his brother. “Come on Daveed. Your faster then that.” He spoke laughing. He then turned around to see a branch going to his face. He ran into this thing before as a kid.

When Walter was a kid and a genin with his brother, They would jump in the trees and go out looking to help people. The young Walter would get cocky and lead the way. When he turned around he looked at his brother saying the same thing as before. “Come on Daveed. Your faster then that.” He laughed and turned around seeing the branch. The branch would hit him in the face and have him doing six backflips to the ground. He lived but it hurt like hell.

Now back to the time and place they are in now, Walter put his hand out in front of the branch and flipped over it. He slowed down a little and was next to his brother. He gained his speed back up and was still next to him. Boy oh boy I’ve grown. He thought to himself and laughed. He popped his neck and looked at the trees. The trees never seemed to end. The forest was long and full of life. Guess the picked the best place to name there village The Village Hidden In The Leaves. Walter put his hand in his pocket and pulled out another ciggaret. He lit the tip of it and covered it with his hand so the fire won’t go out when he tried to light the tip. He put the pack and lighter away and felt the smoke passing through his lips. He breathed out the smoke and smiled. He was getting closer to the place. He could feel it. He still had no clue what the hell he was doing but it was something. Walter looked at the sky and breathed out the smoke. It was really a nice day. He looked back at were he was going and lost his footing. Walter slipped down and then grabbed a low branch. He slid off of the branch and hit the ground. He jumpped back up and was jumping up and forward at the same time. He was now next to his brother again but still a little lower then him. Walter jumpped up and was next to him. He smiled at his brother. Walter was having fun all ready on this mission. He just could not wait to get back home and relax. He closed his eyes and opened them up. His brother had one dot in his eyes. But Walter had two. He looked at the trees and could see more then before.


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PostSubject: Re: Walter, Captain of divison 8   Fri Aug 27, 2010 4:55 pm

Sound of Voice: Be more detailed.

Appearance: Please write out a written description.

Personality: More detailed if you want to be a captain.

Background: Larger history.

Role-play sample: Not enough for captain level.

Do these things and I'll read it more thoroughly.
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PostSubject: Re: Walter, Captain of divison 8   Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:18 pm

More detailed appearance. Try getting into the little things.

Will you be able to continue doing that kind of role-play sample throughout your role-play?

Do these things and I'll read it more thoroughly.
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PostSubject: Re: Walter, Captain of divison 8   Fri Aug 27, 2010 8:54 pm

Your specialty is very fast... which is odd because I thought it said not related to battle.
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PostSubject: Re: Walter, Captain of divison 8   Fri Aug 27, 2010 8:56 pm

fixed.

P.S. no need to be a dick about it. Just say hay it can't be battle related
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PostSubject: Re: Walter, Captain of divison 8   Sat Aug 28, 2010 9:58 am

Three things.

Please answer my question, will you be able to perform this type of role-play sample all the time?

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Please fill in your specialty.

Your sound of voice. Please make it more original. Describe how it sounds. Is it deep, respected, annoying, chilling to the bone, etc?
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PostSubject: Re: Walter, Captain of divison 8   Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:43 am

better?
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PostSubject: Re: Walter, Captain of divison 8   Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:14 pm

Approved as a shinigami, but not necessarily a captain yet.
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