Alright, here it goes:
The first one seems like it is wrapped in saran wrap; and the left side seems like it was fogged up making it hard to make out the item in the renders left hand, the text, the brush strokes and the background. The only difference in the second one is that the text fails slightly more. It is light, it has a drop shadow which, I personally, think is best used behind a render for dramatic effect and it doesn't blend with the GFX.
Other than that I say this GFX is far from fail.