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PostSubject: Kush Haze ((Done))   Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:48 pm

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Name: Kush Haze
Nickname(s): None
Age: 795
Visual Age: 18

Gender: Male
Ex-Division: 7th
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Height: 6'0''
Weight: 180

Body Frame: Muscular
Blood Type: O
Sound of Voice: Pretty deep, with a deceptive tone that he gets when he gets excited
Appearance:

Kush is a lightly skinned guy. He doesnt have any defects to his appearance, and isnt a ugly guy. Kush is actually quite handsome. He has black hair, with brown eyes and fairly defined face. Kush wears a dark stripped hat, that covers his eyes almost completely until he looks up. The hat is pretty thick, and sits on his head so perfect that the hat probably wouldnt fall off during basic maneuvering like shunpo's, or running. Kush also wears a white tee shirt that hugs his body. The shirts arms go to about his elbows, and is a pretty thin shirt. He is usually spotted wearing a hoody that zips up but is open most of the time. Kush wears dark colored pants that are almost a dark brown, the pants being very nice. The pants are pretty long, going past his ankle and down to the sole of his shoe. The pants are also deep pocketed, and have fine creases in them to make them look more dressy. His shoes are dark black, and have no real insignia on them. They look like dress shoes, but are actually sneakers. Kush also has deep pockets inside of the hoody, were he puts most of his vials and different assortment of things to use. Kush is about 6'0'', being averagely tall. His body is toned out, him having lean, responsive muscles instead of big and less responsive muscles.

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Introvert/Extrovert: Introvert
Hobbies: Tinkering with things, making different types of plants to study for medicine and other uses, relaxing
Likes and Dislikes: .

Likes- Kush likes to hang out, relax, tinker with things he can get his hands on especially things like cars, boats, and other motorized things. Kush likes to be by himself sometimes, and likes to think. He likes to create special plants and make medications from the herbs he can make. He likes to study things, especially battle, being a mixed martial artist. He mostly knows Judo, Akido, Jeet Kune Do, Wing Chun, Kung Fu, and other different fighting styles. Kush likes alot of things, especially girls. Kush is a closet pervert, but admits it when it comes up.

Dislikes- Kush doesnt have to many dislikes. He doesnt like people that are uppity, and snobby. He doesnt like tomotoes, and doesnt like olives.

Personality: Kush is a very nice person. He would be the person to come up to you, and greet you warmly while giving you a piece of candy. He isn't the type of person to sit back and wait, he is usually doing something. He gets all his work done first, then relaxes. Even if he "chooses" what work it is, he still gets it done no matter what. Kush isn't the type of person to let punishment go easily, he is strict when it comes to business, but is pretty laid back either way. Kush is very random, usually saying weird things that are off the wall most the time. He is the person to usually break the tension, the first one to talk, the last one to talk insults. He is very uptight sometimes, wanting things to go his way. Even though his relaxedness cancels most of it out, he usually will put his thoughts in any conversation, not caring if he interrupts most the time. Kush is a abysmal, not caring what happens, laid back type of guy. Growing up in the 80th district was very harsh on him, but he still kept his kindness about him. Because even in the dirt, theres still life. Even if his life wasn't the greatest, he managed to keep a couple good friends from there. After he moved to the 80th district to the 78th, he meet more people that he could trust easily. Kush has a very firey personality, he can be calm at one point, then be very outgoing and funny. He's something of a people person, being able to hold conversations with anybody. His humor is basically like everyone elses, even though he can be abit outrageous sometimes. Kush is a very happy person, being a lazy happy person isn't a good combination, Kush does it by nature. He rather sit back in the sun and sleep rather then go out and do paper work. Even though that is every bodies preference. He just takes it to a whole new level. Kush is a very strict guy underneath his lazy exterior. He is down to business when it comes towards him, and he always gets the job done.

Defining Characteristics:
Specialties: Fixing things, cooking.
Fighting type: Kush is more of a Well Rounded fighter.
History/Background: Human life

Kush grew up in a small urban town outside of Okinawa. At the age of 12, he was very young and open minded. His parents being the owners of a farm, he never really knew what city life was about in his days. His dream growing up was being a samurai for some big wig hiring body guards as they did their dirty deeds. He didnt know why he wanted to be a personal body guard, but he knew that he wanted to achieve the name Samurai. Working with his father and mother on the farm feilding rice and wheat made him a pretty strong young man. He eventually across a man named Solo. Solo was a master martial artist in wing chun, a martial art in the Eastern culture. Wing chun is a very old martial art, not having a date when it was created. After long days of working on the fields, Kush would pratice Wing Chun, learning how to defend himself properly. Because soon he would be going to school in the city. He knew the students there would not like him, being from a peasent farm outside of Okinawa, so he wanted to be prepared. Eventually, after a couple of years, he turned 16 and was already enrolled at Mitsubishi High School. He was very lucky, most childern from a farm usually stay on the farm for the rest of their lives. So, Kush knew this would be his only chance at getting what he wanted. To be a Samurai... with a education. He didnt know alot about school, he wasnt book smart, so they had to put him in special classes so he could get up to date with what was going on. Kush eventaully learned everything in under a year, being very successful with his education. After catching up, doing very hard work, he eventaully caught up with his fellow peers, and graduated high school. Now, his dreams of becoming a samurai was gone. He wanted the simple life of being behind a desk. But, at the age of 21, he was killed by a street gang for walking down the wrong alley.

Soul Society

Kush entered the Soul Society like any other spirit. After moving around alot, he ended up in the hard district 80. District 80 is the most crime infested, violent place in the whole SS, Kush being influenced greatly by the harden streets of District 80. After a couple of years in Rokungai, he was pretty well known. But he still trusted no one. After some paper work and some hard bargaining, he finally moved to district district 78. Still living in the lower class, he felt like he was never going to be able to fulfill his life long dream. He still had a great desire to wield a sword. Working at a local store, he earned money to live so he could survive. After showing he had spiritual pressure, Shinigami that came through very rarely, came and surveyed him, and took him back to the Gotei 13. Inside Soul Society, he was given a Zanpaktou, and trained every second he could. He found out his Shikai pretty quickly as well. His Zanpaktou told him his name, Raijin, and after training for years, he learned his Shikai. But he still had to work to make ends. So, he balanced everything out nice enough to live comfortably. After years of work, he made his way up to the Lieutenant seat, and did everything he could to keep the position. He was always in fights, either starting them or defending his position, and always won. He won many fights, and still trained harder then most Shinigami in the whole Gotei 13. Kush was almost a mildstone for always training. He turned into a very strong person, coming up in the 80th district in the Rukongai. Kush always got his chores done, being a very clean person, keeping everything in order giving his Captain a good perspective on him. Being in many fights put Kush in a higher position of power, making alot of lower seated officers scared of him. Even though Kush isnt a bad person at heart.

"So, what are you trying to say?" Kush looked at the man who was challenging his authority. The man was about 5'8, with regular Shinigami clothes on, and had a buzz cut. His hair was brown, and he had a very regular face. "Yeah I do, Lieutenant. Your a lousy seated officer that cant do anything!" Kush didnt move. He put his hand on the sheath of his Zanpaktou, and drew his sword slowly. "Do you want to come test this?" The other man pulled his Zanpaktou quickly, and swiped it down into a regular fighting position. "Ahhhhh!" The man threw his sword over his head and ran towards Kush, when he was close enough he swiped his sword down onto Kush, and Kush threw his sword up with one hand, the too swords clashing together. Kush pushed off the mans sword, and swong his blade to his right, then swiped in horizontally into the mans left. The shinigami put his Zanpaktou downward in a parry position, the blades crashing again. He pushed off Kush's blade, and swong it above his head, and swong his blade at Kushs left, Kush quickly put his blade in a parry position, the blades clashing again. Then the man took his blade back and tried stabbing at Kush with the point of his sword. He stabbed several times, put his arm back into a swinging position and swong horizontally at him. Kush bobbed and weaved through the mans attempt, and hopped backwards quickly, the sword barely touched his shinigami robes. Kush quickly hopped into a opening in the mans defense, and put his sword to his throat. "You sure you can keep up with me?" The man with the brown hair looked shocked and suprised. Kush eased up, and hopped back 4 feet of so. The brown haired man got angry, and his spiritual pressure began to rise dramatically. "You going in shikai now, right? Well, lets see it." Kush pus his sword at his side. "YOUR DAMN RIGHT I AM! IM NOT GOING TO LOSE TO YOU!!" The mans blade was bright for a second, and transforms into big blades the floated around him, the blade on the handle of his Zan disappearing. The blades were about 2 feet long, and there was about 6 of them. The man pointed his handle at Kush, and the blades fly at him. But by the time they got there, Kush shunpo'd right infront of the man, putting his blade up to his throat again. "King me?" But before anything else could happen, the 7th division captain appeared. "Kush, theres paper work to be done. Get there." "He started it." Kush said camly, and disappeared from the seen. The captain of the 7th division was going to deal with him, Kush thought. He didnt even want to fight really. But, he went back to work like always, and didnt think about it for the rest of the day.

One day Kush was with his Captain on a hollow hunt. Hollows were everywhere in Karakura. It was a long hard day already, and Kush had to keep going deeper and deeper into Karakura. Walking down a lone street, A huge hollow appeared jumping from building to building. The Captain took off after it. Kush, standing there dumbfounded alittle bit, ran after the Captain. By the time he was over the building, the Captain came flying down into a building and went unconscious. "Captain! Captain!! Kush flash stepped over to the man, blood running down the sides of his face as he went in and out of consciousness. Kush looked up, the hollow jumping on the edge of the building and roared. Kush took his Zanpaktou, and put it infront of him. "Show them your power, Raijin!" Electricity started to pour out of the Zanpaktou, as the blade disappeared, getting ripped apart by the electricity. After his blade was gone, electricity ripped and roared around him, creating a steady flow of it all around him. Kush pushed off the ground, and appeared in front of the hollow, throwing his hand downward into it while electricity shot out of his hand, creating a large beam of current to slice through his body. The hollow fell into two pieces. He seemed like the victor, shunpoing back to the captain, the rest of his team around him trying to wake him up. After a couple of moments, Kush was sweep off his feet, something squeezing into his mid section. Kush went flying, and hit a building about 100 feet to there left. Kush went through the wall and landed on a bookshelf, toppling everything over on it. Kush got up slowly, and seen that there were now two hollows, swiping and throwing the rest of his team. "He can regenerate that quickly?! And regenerate into two?! This is no ordinary hollow..." Kush got up, and went faster then a shunpo this time, as two whips of electricity formed behind him. The electricity Kush put his body into a throw, and swiped his hand down, the whip ripping through the hollows body like butter. The other hollow jumped ontop of a building, with a dead shinigami in his mouth, stood there and roared as he dropped the body. Kush stopped mid air, and pushed off the air, swinging his other whip at the monster, cutting him straight through, his body crackling within its flesh. While Kush had his focus on the two cut in half hollow, the other hollow regenerated, and smacked Kush out of the air. He went flying into another building, and the hollow followed. Kush slammed into the building, the hollow close on his tail, punched Kush through the wall. The hollow was ontop of him, hitting Kush in his head. Then, the same hollow clone jumped Kush. Kush fell unconscious. While unconscious, he meet his inner hollow.

His inner world was like a forest. The forest was very dank, and quiet. There was no breeze, no animals, nothing. Just a regular forest that was dark and damp. Kush walked through this place for awhile. "Where am I?" Kush said, rubbing his head. A man appeared infront of him about 50 yards away. "Hello. Its great to finally meet you in person." The man said with a bit of excitement in his voice. "I think its about time we meet. Im helping you out right now." The man was very close suddenly, the man put a blade right into Kushs arm. Kush looked serious, and went to his sheath to get his Zanpaktou. But it wasnt there! "Who are you?!" Kush realized that the blade the man had was his own! Kush took the blade by the hand, and pushed it out of his arm. Kush's hand was cut and bloody. "Lets put it like this. Im the better half of you. Your just in my way right now, I will take you over. I will kill everything in sight." "So this was the outcome of the experiments he went through? Something wasn't right... He knew that someone had experimented on him, the guy he could barely remember. He remembered that he was on a different hollow hunt, and he got lost. Some guy drugged him. And when he woke up, he had a strange feeling... the man that was experimenting on him had opened up the door for the hollow side of him to come out. Bing left alone in a forest opening, he started to spew out a white substance((no homo)) and felt like he was being tooken over. He somehow fought the... whatever it was back, and went on to go back to his Captain barely scratched. There were alot of questions... Kush filling those questions with lies. And on the outside of his inner mind, this is what was happening to him.The inner hollow of Kush stabbed at him recklessly, but enough to keep him on his toes. Kush swiftly bobbed and weaved in and out of the barrage. Kush weaved through a attack, and came in and punched the inner hollow. The inner him stumbled back, and the blade started to slowly rip apart in electricity. Then, a wave of electricity flew at him, Kush hopped in the air and landed behind the hollow. "No, your in my way." Kush spun around and hit the inner hollow with his elbow, the hollow went flying. Then, appeared infront of Kush. He stabbed the blade through Kush's gut, Kush holding the blade. After a second or two, the blade and the inner hollow began to dissolve. "...This is my body..." The other hollow disappeared quickly, and screamed when he did. Kush woke up to see blood everywhere. He was standing on a bunch of little, dead hollows. The hollows slowly disappeared, and Kush had a mask on. He didnt know what this meant, but the back-up looked scared and baffled. The attacked kush. Electricity crackling around him, he disappeared from the scene, he was never seen again by the shinigami.

Kush understood what he had to do, but he didn't know what he did. Did he kill all those shinigami? What did all this mean? He didn't have a clue where he was going, he just knew that he couldnt go back to the Soul Society. He knew of one Shinigami going rouge, and they probably were looking for him at this very moment. He wondered if he would come across this rouge shinigami on day. But he didn't know if he went through the same things. Who was that person when he went unconscious? Would he benefit from the guy from his unconscious. He felt like his reiatsu change when he came too, then it went back to normal. But it was still different. He felt his reiatsu come close to a Captain. But he wasn't that strong. A Captain is on a whole different level when it came to spiritual pressure. He would have to train alot to control whatever he had. He had killed that inner self, thats what he thought he was, and he felt stronger ever since. He needed to find someone like him to clear things up. He had heard that there were people of hollow reiatsu and became incredibly strong once they activated something. There mask he thought. They called themselves the Vaizard ones, and lived in the real world. He didn't think they were here, seeing as Karakura was a hot spot for hollows. But he would have to talk to them and see what was going on with himself. Kush was flying through the air, not knowing were he was. He stopped at a large forest, thinking he could train and set up camp. He found a opening in the trees, and hit the ground hard. Looking around, he went and sat down at a nearby fallen tree. The electricity coming off of Kush slowly went into his hand, his handle and blade appearing after a couple of seconds. He sheathed his blade and looked out into space. What would his Captain think? He just up and left Soul Society. He would have to talk to someone about this.

After a couple minutes of reflecting, he had to find somewhere to sleep for tonight. He didn't have a a gigai to go into town, but he could find somewhere to go sleep. Kush thought he should stay away from Karakura anyway, they would probably be looking for since Shinigami were already over there. So, Kush layed back on the log, and took a nap. Kush dreamt of the soul society. He was walking around the Gotei 13, he was the only one there. Then, his Captain was infront of him. "Kush... we have to talk... Then he woke up instantly. A couple of hours past. He sat up on the log, and stood up and stretched. It was getting dark pretty fast, and its been awhile since he was last seen by the shinigami. So, he jumped into the air, and began his way to Karakura. Wondering if they were still looking for him, he found a small alley to go in. He walked out into the empty street, and seen a clothes store. Then he realized that he couldnt be seen by humans anyway, and shrugged. "Man... I need to slow down..." He was still shook up after having to fight off his inner self. Kush continued to walk down the empty street. It had to be late, because the sun was going down. The dark streets of Karakura were silent. It was nice to him, being able to have alittle piece. Back at the SS, he always was doing paper work or running errands. Stuff people below him would have to do. He always wondered why he was doing subordinates work. Oh well. It doesnt matter now though. Know he had to find one thing... Somewhere to sleep. Kush walked for about an hour, looking for somewhere to go. Coming up in the 80th district of the Rukongai made him alittle instinctual. He found somewhere to sleep... Another alley. The alley was dark, damp, dank, down... Thousands of words could describe this alley. All it is is a temporary home for Kush. The lost Vaizard. He went into the alley, and looked at the most clean spot he could, and sat down. With his Zanpaktou over his shoulder, he sat and put his head on the wall behind him. What was he going to do now? There was a slight chance he could find the people called the Vaizard ones. But where? They were just a rumor for certain. Unless he was one himself. He remembered the thing that was crumbling over his face when he came too. With all those Shinigami dead. He felt bad alittle bit. He didn't know what happened except that he woke up standing over dead hollows. He felt tense for a second, then relaxed. It was going to be a rough night in that alley in Karakura. Tomorrow, he would have to find someone to help him with refuge. Because Kush was just a strong Lt. He was no captain. He wasn't Kazumi. He wondered what the Captain Commander would think about him disappearing. Would anybody care? Would Jan Totti, his Captain, care at all? All these thoughts and emotions struck Kush throughout the night. He didn't sleep much anyway. There was the occasional rat that scurried by him every once in a while. Kush managed to get some sleep though, and drifted off into the tomorrow.

Kush woke up to people talking, walking down the street. He didn't think anything of it at first, because nobody could see him. He sighed, the light coming from above the alley shined on his face anyway, so it was a forced wake up. There wasn't anything in particular he had to do, so he just decided to watch the people around him. Try to remember how it was before he died. But, by todays standards, things were very different. In every way, everything was different. From laws to taxes to anything that you could imagine, was different. Kush smiled at some people as the walked by, Kush standing in the mouth of the alley just observing people finally walked out of the alley and walked down the street. He watched the sky as he walked, enjoying the day. His Shinigami robes were torn, and bloodied, so if anybody did see him they would be alarmed. He was glad noone could see him. Infact, it was the greatest feeling in the world right now. He could laugh at anybody he wanted, he could make faces at people, he could do anything. It sparked a childhood memory, thinking, if i had the chance to do anything, this would be it. Instead of trying to enjoy the rest of the sunny day, Kush thought it would be best to try and find someone like him. With hollow and shinigami reiatsu. He felt alot better today then when he came too yesterday. When he came too from being "unconscious", he felt horrible. Like he did something he wouldn't normally do. Plus all this blood and his torn shinigami robes made it clear that something happen. Not to mention the crumbled piece of some type of material that crumbled off his face. He believed he's becoming a Vaizard, like Hisoka. The rumors must have been true. The Gotei 13 obviously didn't want anyone to be alarmed, or anyone to know what happened to him. So... what really happened to him? Were there more? They were only rumors into what seemed like an infinitely opened conversation. Kush thought while he walked around the streets, trying to find a way to get ahold of someone like him.

After walking for awhile, he came across something that caught his eye. Somebody walking down the street with immense spiritual pressure. Who was this? This pressure was on level with a captain. Or close to a captain. Ms. Totti's spiritual pressure was great. Her's was on a whole different level. But this could rival hers. He was starting to miss the SS. After walking faster, he came across the man. He had spikey black hair, wearing something he wasn't used to. He was the man named Ichijouji, a vaizard. Now, Kush didn't know this at the time, he could just feel his spiritual pressure, and how strong it was. When talking to him, Ichijouji seemed like a well off guy. He didnt smell bad, and he seemed like he knew what he was talking about. Ichijouji was in fact a Vaizard, which blew his mind! There were more people like himself, making Kush feel welcome in this new society that he had to live in. And live with. There wasn't much else the "young" Vaizard could do for him, infact, he actually had a place to train and eat at. So, after introductions and small talk was over, he had a place for Kush to train at. After walking about a mile or so out of Karakura, in the trees, they went to an underground bunker somewhere. Kush had to train for many days before he could actually control his Vaizard mask with, he even found more Vaizards like himself there! Ichijouji even had a change of clothes for Kush, and got rid of those beat up, ripped apart, blood stained Shinigami outfit. Kush felt at home with these beings that held hollow and shinigami reiatsu with. Kush liked to train with them, honing his skills with the Vaizard mask and everything else overall. Kush was a master of mixed martial arts, knowing many forms known as Wing Chun, Jeet Kune Do, Karate, Taekwando, and many other styles. He even taught them some new styles in the process. There was much to learn still though. Kush hasn't reached bankai, but has mastered his Zanpaktou nicely. It was hard to earn trust of the Vaizard ones, but he earned it over time.

In a training session on time, Kush went alittle over board. Kush pulled his blade and began to raise his spiritual pressure. Electricity sparked the whole area, electricity ripping off of him, making a loud crackling noise everytime electricity bounced around about him. Kush's blade fully disappeared, and a large current of electricity wrapped itself around Kush like a blanket. He then focused at a training dummy that was about 20 feet away from him in this large underground bunker of his. Kush pointed at the dummy, and shot a beam of electricity threw the dummys head, and it exploded in all directions, completely destroy the head of the dummy. Kush then appeared infront of the dummy, hitting him several times in the abdomen and sent the dummy flying with a hit to the chest. The dummy made a big crack in the wall, making a indent. Kush smiled. "I think I went a little overboard. heh heh." Kush then put his hand out, as all the electricity ran to his hand and formed a blade. The current stopped, and Raijin formed again in its sealed form. After many months of training, it was time for Kush to go. He left the Vaizards, on a path to no where. The Vaizards would always have a home for Kush, and Kush would do anything for them in return. He was in debt to Ichijouji, and the rest of the Vaizard family. Kush was still on a path to nowhere though. Walking around the streets of Karakura always cleared his mind. And even made him happy. He walked for days in the forest, knowing all he had to do was fly back to Karakura. he had a deep love for nature for some reason. Life's basics were in the wild, and Kush liked to be in the middle of all that. It was soothing, relaxing, anything that he could think of. After days of walking, he returned back to Karakura and fought hollows. He even watched some fights that occurred with some shinigami and espada. They didn't know he was watching, keeping his spiritual pressure low. The last thing he wanted was a shinigami to find out this is were Kush, the new Captain of the 7th division was at. Execution didn't seem like it was his best playing card right now either. They were going to give him the promotion to be the 7th division captain, until he disappeared.

Role-play Sample: The fairly tall man walked through the lush green forest. The smells of fresh leaves and dew in the air leaves a faint smile on his face. He could here the low whisper of a creek nearby, the smell of crisp clean water hitting his nose every so often. He loved nature, even though deep down his heart was filled with sludge and grime. His love for life was ironic enough for his love of death. Even though he doesnt take life's for no reason. He is a complex man, and his complexity leaves him to where he is today. In a deep, wonderful forest with no where to go. The man doesnt look back though. He believes that everything happens for a reason and the reason "abnormal" things happen to him is to make him stronger. He laughs at the thought. Maybe things that happen abnormally happen because he makes them happen. He shrugs, and gazes at the sun as its rays bounce off everything. Making it seem like the sun had an eye on him. He smiles, looking up at the sky. Its white hue's smearing across the light blue sky. He looks back down and keeps heading down his own path. Leading to where? He doesnt know, but what he does know is that he needs to look out for rogue ninja. They're not to much of a problem, but sneak attacks are fair play in a world without rules. His path takes him to a rickity old bridge. Its wood looked rotted with a dull brown with faded in white, its posts ate'en(?) away from years of water coroding(?). "Hm." He walks onto the bridge without worry. Each step is hollow and light as he walks along the shakey crossing. He can hear the boards cracking under his feet, but pays no attention. The last couple boards buckle under his weight, but he hops up quickly, hopeing no one heard him cross. He takes a couple steps out, his eye's focused forward into another opening in dense foliadge(? cant spell today). When he enters, pushing away twigs and branchs in his route, he hears something rustling. He hops behind a tree, pulling a kunai and grasping its handle tightly. The man peaks around the tree, seeing the widen path stretch and curve into foliadge(?) it disappearing. He notices the same rustling, and hugs the tree tighter, in a striking postion. The sound gets closer. "...To big to be a rodent... not big enough to be a deer..." He points out, as the rustling turns to shuffling, and the shuffling turns to mumbling. "...I heard him! He was spotted coming in eastward, so he cant be to far." Said a short, stocky shinobi with a big ugly smile. He wore all grey, and had a two large shuriken on his back. His jet black hair slicked back like a greasers. "Well, if you were any louder..." Says another short, slightly taller young ninja. He has black hair, and wore a blue vest with grey pants. "Well come one." The greaser snaps, and they walk out the same path as the man. "Hm. My que..." He pulls another kunai, and walks silently behind them. The man had jumped onto a tree branch, with a perfect view of the two. He smiled. A part of him liked the hunt. "...I dont see him." Says the boy, looking around the area of the bridge. "..." The greaser just seems angry, looking into the forest, then back to the bridge, then the water. The man ties a exploding tag onto the kunai silently. "Lets go back. He isnt here." The greaser heads to the opening. "...Alright..." The boy says with disappointment, heading toward the opening. The man waits for the the opening, pulling another kunai and placing a exploding tag on it. When the two bend down, right when they start pushing the twigs and branchs away he leaps from the branch. Soaring through the air, he launchs the kunai with a downward swing, using the momentum to flip and land perfectly on a branch. The kunai wiz to their targets. One piercing the greaser neck, the other going into the chest of the boy. "Gack! Guh!" The greaser spits blood trying to speak. "Gack!! Garggle!!!" He spins alittle, gasping for air. "Oww!!" The boy notices the tag, and his eyes widen. "I don-... I dont..." Then BOOOM! Two large explosions occur. The man doesnt look, and hops down a few branchs, then onto the path. He starts his journey again. He wonders why he must run. He wonders why he cant return to the good life. Helping others. Helping the community. He realizes something, and for the first time in years he looks back. He looks back at the opening, seeing the carnage he just created. The blood splattered green leaves. The brownish crimsion dirt, brain matter mixed in with grains of soil and leafs. He realizes why he can no longer go back to the peaceful community. He realizes why he cant go back to have a family. He knew why he had killed his best friend... The minute he is angered... there would be no rules... no holding back... no regrets... His eyes wide, and facial features without expression. He holds back tears... and walks down the same, going no where path... the path of a missing ninja.


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PostSubject: Re: Kush Haze ((Done))   Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:16 pm

Please do the following.

1. Add a written appearance.

2. Your specialty shouldn't have anything to do with fighting.

3. Please choose 1 Fighting style, not a mixture of 3.

4. Your history seem to be missing some important information. Not to mention, its more like a mixture of an RP sample and some story telling. I am willing to overlook that for the most part. In any case, please add into your history, where the Hollowfication process began. As in was it an experiment on your character? Did someone or something manage to corrupt your soul chain? I don't see how you could fall unconscious and then suddenly wake up a Vizard.

5. Please highlight the edits for your history, or put them in bold. I have no intentions of reading through all of that again, to find your edits when you make them.

6. Do these things and you just might get an approved stamp.
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PostSubject: Re: Kush Haze ((Done))   Wed Aug 25, 2010 5:51 pm

I editted, and I put how Kush was experimented on, its in bold, but does it have to have something like me getting trained to be a vaizard and controlling the mask? Im just alittle confused about that.
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PostSubject: Re: Kush Haze ((Done))   Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:43 pm

Your Specialty stills relates to fighting. So please remove anything to do with Fighting.

Erm..that little edit about you being experimented on, seems far too random for my taste. As such if another Mod/Admin demands more, don't be surprised.
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PostSubject: Re: Kush Haze ((Done))   Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:49 pm

Alright. Well i edited
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PostSubject: Re: Kush Haze ((Done))   Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:51 pm

I don't like it.

APPROVED!
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