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Hiyoku Batekai

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PostSubject: Hiyoku Batekai   Wed Oct 06, 2010 5:48 pm


Name: Hiyoku Batekai
Nickname(s): Insanity Incarnate
Age: 549
Visual Age: 17

Gender: Male
Division: 11th
Rank: Vice Captain
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 200

Body Frame: Athletic, The muscle he does have is very packed and gives him such a form.
Blood Type: O
Sound of Voice: Dark, Insane, Frightening, If you've ever heard a demon's voice, this is it.
Appearance:§ion=&q=dante#/dj17ev Unlike many others, Hiyoku's appearence is athletic, for his height at least. To say this would mean that he is very muscular if he was not his height, which stretches out the muscle. Doing so allows for more flexibility, and greater control. He has a small scar on his left arm, from his time in Rukongai.

While in a gigai he prefers to go shirtless and wear a red cloak, over dark red pants. All his clothes are made for combat, and as such they do not rip easily. His luitenant's badge is on his right shoulder, always. He has dark grey eyes, focused and analyzing everything. His hair is a white color, and loosely even around his head, coming together every inch or so to make a downward spike of hair.

His body is taller than average, along with being of an athletic body type, his chest and stomache muscles are very packed and thick, meaning they are harder than certian metal alloys. He is very flexible and fast with his reaction timing, due to his athletic body figure, however this does not mean he isnt strong, infact his strength is his highest attribute. His strength has been said to be close to the former Kenpachi (cannon kenpachi)

Introvert/Extrovert: Extrovert
Hobbies: Hunting, drinking, flirting, irritating people for no appearent reason, Stating that he is a fictional character on some random online forum, to freak people out.
Likes and Dislikes:

Likes- Ramen: Nothing better than a steaming bowl of sodium.
Sake: What else is there to drink?
Partying: How else are you supposed to meet people?
Learning: Knowledge is the ultimate weapon.
Training: Getting stronger is always a bonus.
Sleeping: Nothing is better than escaping the nightmare of life, than nightmares of the mind.
Scaring people: Hey he's insane, deal with it.

Dislikes- Arrogance: who wants to deal with Mr. Perfect?
Ignorance: Its not bliss.
Evil: Hey he's insane, but he has morals.
Copying: No one likes a copycat.

With as much trouble as Hiyoku has dealt with, he has become mentally unstable, though it seems his morals are still intact, he is random and very crazy. At this point many wonder how he became a Vice Captain, until they remember for which division he is in. Although he is rude, insane, and scary, he has shown he does indeed have pure intention. He had not been deemed harmful, as such he has kept his position.

He has many friends, and is somewhat outgoing, much prefering anything to sitting at a desk. He doesnt abuse the power he has, though he does show a distaste for respect towards those more powerful, as he beleives that respect is earned, not gained, and certianly not gained through power. He has been known to be rude to people who act arrogant, and overall everyone else as well.

His Insane attitude is a cover up for a disturbed and depressed soul, who, in truth, never had a chance at a normal life. He is said to be like energy, covering everything, and the impression he leaves, is permanent. His very pressence can make men, even ones as powerful as him, quake with fear, not for physical reasons, but for the fact he is known to have adept knowledge of psychology, and sociology.

Defining Characteristics: His insanity and strength set him apart from everyone else. He is also known for having a strong and feirce will, known for his breaking of kido illusions with sheer willpower. He is known for his wolf like smile, much like gin was for his fox smile. He is set apart mostly by his hatred of respect without deserving it.
Specialties: Strength, Mental Warfare
Fighting type: Powerhouse
History/Background:A child was brought before the Emporer, now normally he would have killed such a child, had he not beaten a few of his guards with nothing but a stick that looked like a sword. This intrigued the emporer and scared him at the same time. A child able to do that would either be a great ally or a terrible threat. The child had a scowl and had wolf like teeth, with short spiky red hair, wild and untamed, just like the child. He had red eyes, and looked to be dirt poor, mainly because of his clothes.

"well you have two choices... execution" The emporer said, making the child cringe. "or you could serve me as a guard.... in the future.. I can have a man teach you" He said. For a single moment Hiyoku felt all hate wash away, he was told the emporer was a cruel and inhuman being, not someone willing to make exceptions, and he demanded perfections.

Hiyoku seriously thought about it, maybe serving him wouldnt be so bad right? However he noticed the emporer had something strange in his voice, not hatred but something he had never felt before. Hiyoku was a very observant child and could easily tell the emporer was up to something, his choice was just made. "I'll take the second option" He smirked.

The emporer had expected this and soon Hiyoku met a man, who had strange brown hair and wore a white outfit with strange design to it. His name was Chukya. 'What a strange name' Hiyoku thought being introduced by the emporer. It still amazed Hiyoku to see the man was different than he thought.

And so began Hiyoku's training, Chukya was impressed that a child had that much skill but did not let it go to his head. It was rough and dangerous, but it was well worth it. Hiyoku also made friends during this time, one of which was the emporer's son, well Hiyoku was the only friend in the friendship. The emporer's son was a stuck up holier-than-thou person. He kind of liked Hiyoku, mainly cause he was a stepping stone for him. This Hiyoku noted, as he was a great phsycologist, before the art was even invented.

(15 year skip)

Hiyoku had advanced greatly in the last few years, he was faster and better than any of the emporer's guards. He had not ever been beaten since Chukya died, and the old emporer died with him. It was a mystery even to Hiyoku how they died, but luckily he was not blamed. He was currently discussing things with the new emporer, the old ones son.

"are you sure that we should do this?" Hiyoku asked. The emporer nodded slowly. Hiyoku immediatly knew something was up, but didnt voice it. "alright but bring four guards with us" He said. Hiyoku was now an imposing figure that stood at an astounding 7ft. and his once short hair was longer and went to his shoulders, giving him an even more wolf like look. He now wore a black jacket, a red shirt and black pants. He had indeed changed.

(small time skip)

Hiyoku, The emporer and four other people were heading towards current day japan, hearing rumors that there was an island with civil people. The emporer smirked, everything was going according to his plan.

Hiyoku however knew something was up, but he had no choice to go through with it. He felt nothing as everyone else fell over from the crash onto land, not much of a crash, just a slight jolt that made the ship unmoveable.

They set up camp in a small forest, and rested there, while Hiyoku was up planning. He heard a noise and checked it out, but what he saw pissed him off more than anything before.

Ten Samurai sorounded the camp, and the others were dead, except the emporer. Hiyoku immediatly grabbed his sword and stabbed one right through the neck, a quick death. He took the samurai's sword and held it in a reverse grip, finding it better than his other sword.

Two Samurai had heard him and charged, thinking he would be an easy kill, oh how wrong they were. Hiyoku jumped above them and side flipped, while slashing, killing on of the Samurai, and kicked the other away.

This time Eight samurai charged at him and he blocked most attacks, while taking one hit. He grabbed a blade and pulled it towards him, forsaking the blade he had before. He grabbed the Samurai's head and kneed it, causing the man to bend over, then kicked his stomache, unknowingly breaking it from the inside, causing internal bleeding and death.

He kicked another one, but he grabbed his foot and twisted, surprised when Hiyoku reversed his reverse, by slamming his hands on the ground and doing an upside down spinning kick all around, knocking all but two back.

He grabbed his sword and threw it at one Samurai hard. It peirced him in his eye, killing him. He punched a Samurai and broke his ribs, knocking him out. The Samurai were begining to back off now, all but one were gone now. He grabbed the last one and took his helmet off. Appearently these were not the normal samurai, but this one was, making it a fair fight, which made Hiyoku smile, although he wondered why they didnt wear chest armor.

They bowed to each other, and Hiyoku picked up his original sword. He swung it down on the Samurai, surprised when the samurai's katana didnt break. The Samurai however felt his heels dig into the ground. He was sweating scared of this man infront of him. The emporer was shocked to see Hiyoku able to fight on this kind of level, he had definitely underestimated him.

Finally the katana broke, and Hiyoku's sword went straight through the Samurai, splitting him in two. Hiyoku panted, he'd made his first kill today and was alright with it, knowing he'd chosen his path and they had chosen theirs.

(week time skip)

Hiyoku and the emporer were now in a town that doubled as a port looking for a boat to take them back to China. When they finally found one it was crappy and cheap, as both parties agreed.

On the open sea someone charged out of the deck below, which they had been told was storage. Hiyoku's thoughts were confirmed as the emporer stood by twenty Samurai, all with armor and katanas. Hiyoku sighed in a lazy manner, before slicing an unexpecting Samurai in half. Right before that however a hole appeared in the floor, from his weights, he was surprised he hadnt fallen in but saved that for later.

Four samurai charged him, while the others circled the emporer in a guarding way. Hiyoku narrowly dodged a blade that was close to slicing his head off. He grabbed the Samurai's arm and bent it backwards, make him scream in pain. He the snapped his neck in a quick motion. He knew he didnt have enough time to pull out his sword.

Another samurai from the four kicked at Hiyoku. Hiyoku caught his leg and brought his elbow down on his knee, breaking it backwards as well. Hiyoku through him overboard, and picked up his katana. He threw it at the Samurai guarding the emporer, killing one samurai. He then charged at one and punched him on his nose, sending it inside his brain. He killed a few more before one of the guards came out and sliced at his heart. Hiyoku only had enough to to react by dodging to the side slightly.

His arm fell to hte ground, and he screamed in pain. His red eyes seemed to burn. Before the samurai knew what was going on he was decapitated. Hiyoku was sorounded by samurai, but he threw the katana at the now open Emporer, saying "You lose what I do" as it chopped right through the bone of his arm, making it slowly tear off since skin couldnt hold his arm by itself. Hiyoku fell backwards off the boat and quickly tore his shirt to stop the bleeding from his arm.

A woman named Bokino found him and healed him. He had drifted on her shore. She lived on a small island. She had long black hair and a beautiful face. She grew close to him and he, her.

(1 year skip)

Hiyoku was walking home one day from his new job. He was getting paid to fish, a minor skill he had developed over the years. He walked in the house only to find the walls splattered with blood. He saw his wife on the floor with a golden sword through her heart. He fell to his knees and cried for three hours. He fell asleep crying and when he woke up he was in a cell and the emporer was standing infront of him. He was knocked out again and when he awoke he found himself with a katana and the emporer infront of him with a katana.

He slashed at him and the emporer blocked but poorly. Hiyoku stabbed him in his heart and then felt a pain in his chest, only to see his heart peirced by the emporer's katana. He the felt himself fall to hte ground and lose touch with reality.

He was amazed as he stared at his dead body. A japanese door opened and a shinigami with brown hair walked out. Hiyoku also noticed his arm was back, but more importantly this person infront of him was Chukya, his old sensei. He was tapped on the head with the back of a katana and heard a chuckle as he faded. "well looks like soul society is getting another prodigy" Chukya said before Hiyoku faded away into soul society

(100 years before present day)

Hiyoku had been ever vigilant about becoming a squad eleven member, as he had seen their brutality, perfect for him, even as a soul his muscles were good, even by lower class shinigami standards. He was easily one of the best fighters in the Rukongai.

An arrogant shinigami with something to prove had decided he would beat Hiyoku, in a fair duel, after someone he supported was beaten by Hiyoku. He had expected that Hiyoku would go down easy, however the lesser shinigami was not prepared for the sheer ammount of skill that Hiyoku had, after all he was a guard to a chinese emporer, and as such he knew how to beat stronger and faster oponents.

As this happened the current squad eleven captain was watching, surprised that his 20th seat had been beaten so easily, by a normal soul no less. He jumped down infront of Hiyoku, after the fight, and offered him his 20th seat position. Hiyoku gladly accepted.

Since that time Hiyoku has been in many fights, getting promotions along the way, until finally he became the vice captain. His captain had changed over the years, and they had a new captain, someone named Yokkyu Fuman. While Hiyoku did not show his respect to Yokkyu, it was really a good thing, if Hiyoku ever showed respect to someone, they were likely about to die, or be mentally murdered, or psychologically pummeled. Hiyoku managed to get along with Yokkyu fairly well, enough to keep out of trouble at least.
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PostSubject: Re: Hiyoku Batekai   Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:34 pm

Dante, How original.

As for appearence, all shinigami who are in the S.S. wear the Shihakusho.
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PostSubject: Re: Hiyoku Batekai   Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:40 pm

edited, forgot that momentarily, I am used to make rogues.
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PostSubject: Re: Hiyoku Batekai   Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:48 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hiyoku Batekai   Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:52 pm

Oh and that dante comment wasn't an insult. Just an observation.

History and such seems fine, Approved as lieutenant, seeing as I'm sure you've already asked Yokkyu for the position.

Please improve your grammar and such, as a note.
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