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 Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada

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PostSubject: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Sun Sep 19, 2010 11:40 pm

Arrancar

Name: Niiro Odokemono Ryuu
Nickname(s): Nor, Niiro, Red Joker
Age: 1000
Visual Age: 18

Gender: Male
Rank Novena Espada
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 159lbs

Body Frame: Medium
Blood Type: A-
Sound of Voice: Deep; kind of like a voice you would find if you were in a scary movie. Even when speaking in a low, or quiet, manner it is possible to tell what he's saying. The voice is also has a sort of ring to it.
Appearance:
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He only looks like when he is in a serious battle. He will look like this by releasing his spiritual pressure and energy at the same time. He will remove his poncho which will reveal the hollow hole in his stomach that is about five inches in diameter. Without the poncho, or cloak, it will also reveal the "9" on the right side of his chest. Around his hollow hole there will look as if they're are some teeth surrounding it. He doesn't have a very muscular body, but he does have a flat stomach. A black band can also be found around his neck. A "X" on his back and a slash on his right hand can be revealed due to some training when becoming an Espada.
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The poncho that he wears weighs him down so when he takes it off he feels lighter and he is able to move around faster; the same goes for his gloves and shoes. HIs shoes, gloves, and even his poncho/cloak weighs a ton due to being made of a very heavy material; his gloves and shoes are made out of steal and his poncho/cloak was created out of metal threads. The remains of his hollow form can be seen under his right eye; it connects from right under the lower eyelid to an inch away from his eye brow. He has a slightly tanned complextion. His canine teeth are slightly longer than a human's, about 3 inches to be exact. His eyes are red like blood. His hair goes down all the way to the center of his back. He wears the white pants that most Arrancar wear, but doesn't wear the shirt. His earings are red with a single yellow star in the middle of each one; each ring is made of a light metal material. When his gloves are removed it reveals his nails which are two inches longer than the average nail and blacker due to his death and him not being a living being.

Introvert/Extrovert: Introvert
Hobbies: He takes interest in other's weapons, thus likes to collect them after they have died.
Likes and Dislikes:

Likes-
His family
Junk food
weapons
to eat small children
to stare at the moon
Dislikes-
People other than his family
Healthy food
peace
authority figures
the sun.
Personality:
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Defining Characteristics:
-He cracks his bones a lot
-An odd look of death in his eyes
-Likes to cut off the heads of enemies he has defeated.
-Uses long range techniques, such as Cero, up close
Specialties: He can break dance very well
Fighting type: Close Range
History/Background:
Human Arc: This era of Niiro's life has been erased from his memories by an unknown source. It ws done so that he would not reconcile the terrible life that he once had, but we have some records of his previous life as a mere human being.

He was born on a stormy day of November; why was is raining in the middle of fall, no one knew and I'm pretty sure that no one cared either. On this day a red eyed baby was born. When people saw him they believed that he was that of a demon. He was born in a small village in the place that is now known as Japan. Everyone wondered how the child's life would play out in the future and if he would rise to the occasion and become a great man. It was a shame that they were wrong.

When he was growing up he shunned everyone including his family. He liked to stay alone and away from any person that he thought to be some kind of weakling or a waste of his time. The only thing that he considered his friend was a small dog that came to his house everyday to play with him. He found it that it was very much fun, more than any human could give him, and very intruiging to be around the canine. He had grown to love that dog as if it was better than any family he had ever had. The two, Niiro and the dog, grew up together becoming stronger and better together.

When he was of the age of fourteen he started to realize that his best friend stopped coming by his house. He could only wonder where he was and worry about the poor animal. At this time his village had been in the crossfire of a war and it was a stormy day like they day in which he was born. He decided that he would go and look for his canine friend today; it couldn't have been a worse day to go dog searching. He ran out of the house when his parents weren't home and in about two hours he found his companion, but there was something odd about the dog. He was covered in some kind of red liquid, laying in the middle of a field, not moving at all. He wondered what was going on with the dog and before he knew it, everything went black. It would seem that the boy and his dog died together right there, but the boy still believed that the dog was alive somehow.
Plus Arc: This era is also unknown, but there is record of what supposedly happened during this timespan.

During his this time the boy named Niiro could be found floating around Japan, looking for something. In this time his eyes had turned from red to blue, which was weird because his eye color was supposed to change more when he was an infant than during this time period. He traveled around looking for his companion. It was amazing how much he missed this thing. He had never missed anyone or anything in his entire life-span but this creature just seemed to mean the world to him.

In about a few days he had found himself, like literally. He found his dead body and that of the canine he had befriended. He wondered how he was capable of seeing his body like this; it was the strangest thing that he had ever witnessed. He then tried to touch his body and he couldn't. At that moment he realized that he was dead. That had threw him into a state of shock. He stayed like this until the day that his chain of life ate itself. That was then when he turned into a hollow.

Hollow Arc: First he had became a Menos, hunting the ground where he died. He consumed every spirit, or living being on the spot, including other Hollows. After a few months he had became a Menos Grande. He had then traveled to the Menos Forest located in Las Noches. There he found other beings like himself, but he didn't care about them at all. He was only thinking about power and what it would be like to become stronger. So, what he decided to do was to eat these spirits as well. He ate each and every last one of them, and he did it with a passion too. Everytime he ate a new soul of another Menos Grande it would sound like a symphony was playing in the background. He wasn't aware of the time passing by, but after a while he had became a Adjucha. Although he gained this stage it would seem he had lost his memories of the past.

The first thing that Niiro remembers is opening his eyes to see nothing but white sand around him. Everything else seemed to be a blur to him. The hollow didn't know if he had ever been a human, what a human looked like, if others lived here, nothing at all. His life was pretty confusing but all at the same time he felt a little reassured that there was no one here that he was aware of.

After walking around for a while, somehow Niiro stumbled into the Forest of Menos. Why he was down there, he didn't know. What he did notice was that when he was down there he was getting funny looks from the Menos. Then soon after that another Hollow approached him asking him why he was down there. After that he realized that he was an Adjucha which was stronger than a regular Hollow and a Menos. He realized that he was supposed to be back up top feeding upon other Adjuchas to become stronger. At this point he found a way back up top and began traveling around the White Sand Desert.

When he got up top he saw that there were a little more Adjuchas then usual. Not three hours before getting up there he was attacked by an Adjucha. They fought for a bout ten minutes until Niiro killed the other hollow. He ate the Hollow. Something about it didn't feel right, but he knew that he had to continue in order to survive. He didn't mind killing it was just the fact of killing one of his own kind.

One thing that Niiro wondered was how was he at this level already. Something about all this just felt weird to him. He decided that he would do some investigating. He traveled all over the White Sand Desert until he came to the gates of Hueco Mundo. When he got there something that looked like a human, but a Hollow as well was standing there telling Niiro that he was waiting for the Adjucha. The hollow was confused, so the first thought that came to mind was attack this thing, which at the time he didn't know it was an Arrancar. After attacking the Hollow was quickly tossed to the side. After falling to the ground he looked up to see the Arrancar standing over him. The Arrancar pulled something out of its pocket and put it up to Niiro. After a giant flash of light the Adjucha looked nothing like he previously did. After the Arrancar explained what he did to Niiro he took him into Hueco Mundo so that he could live his life out as an Arrancar.

Fraccion Arc: Once entering the land of Arrancars, called Hueco Mundo, Niiro was in awe. He had never seen a place like this and he was surprised that now he could call this his home. Hopefully he would find some kind companion here so that he wouldn't be alone like those long years. There was someone there that had seemed to always have his back or at least help him out in hard times and that had turned out to be his Espada. He didn't know it at that time but the Espada had claimed Niiro as his Fraccion. He looked up to that Espada almost like a father figure because he was always with him and he always had the Arrancar's back. It was supposed to be that the Fraccion was the underling of the Espada but it had turned out that the Espada had treated Niiro like an equal, unlike the rest of the Espada.

Once while in the Human world, Niiro and his Espada had been out there causing trouble for the humans. It would turn out that this was a good way for them to past time and find some kind of amusement in their busy lives. They were in a city where there were plenty of shining lights and a lot tiny, or small, people. As destruction came so did laughter from the two Arrancars. All of a sudden a guy in robes and a sword appeared, but neither Niiro or his Espada knew who this guy was; later on he found out that the name of this male figure was Hunter something something. Before Niiro could even react to the male, who he found out was a shinigami, the Espada and the Shinigami started fighting. The sound of metal scraping together could be heard, and out of nowhere flashes of light would come from the two beings. Niiro figured that at this moment his Espada could use his help, but before he could the Espada was destroyed, being cut in half. The Shinigami must have forgotten about Niiro because, after that he just disappeared through some old doors. Niiro then returned to Hueco Mundo to report what happened. You knew that he might meet this guy again, so his original plan was to fight this guy if he did; but it was unlike Niiro to do something like that, so he didn't know what would happen.

Espada Arc: A had been years since Niiro's old Espada was killed and now he had moved up the ranks in Hueco Mundo. He went from a lowly Fraccion to the tenth strongest Arrancar in all of Hueco Mundo. He had gained a lot more respect than he had ever had and he even had his own little batch of Fraccions. He honestly didn't like having to tell them what to do and all of that, but they wanted to serve under him for some reason; since they wanted to be his Fraccion he didn't really have a problem with it. He had sent them out on a retrieval mission to find something for them, and he figured that they would be gone for a while so he didn't bother with worrying about what time they would be back or if they would come back. I guess you could say that he didn't care for much anymore. At this moment he only cared about one thing and that was getting his rank up more.

Looking at the sun-less sky, Niiro could only guess how long his Fraccion were gone. He stopped worrying about them the minute they left his eye sight, because he had other things to deal with. In the middle of Hueco Mundo there was the Novena Espada and Niiro; they were about to fight for the rank of Novena. Why? Because the Novena Espada was very cocky and figured that if anyone had the balls to challenge him then he would accept their challenge and kill them. Niiro wasn't exactly the confident type, but he didn't really want to stay in this fight for too long or let it drag out for more than a few minutes. He noticed that the Espada left himself wide open because he was gloating; maybe a second later Niiro was two inches away from the Novena Espada with his right hand on the head of the overconfident being releasing a Cero. In an instant the Novena was dead with his head completely missing from his body.

Niiro was now the Novena Espada. It took him a while to obtain this spot, but he made it. He was thinking about going for Octava, but he didn't because later on he figured out that if he took Octava he would have a lot more work for him to do and that wasn't something that he wanted to do. He ended up keeping his Novena spot. When his Fraccion returned they were elated for Niiro but he didn't feel a need for them anymore because of how long it took for them to get back; when they arrived in his presense he released a cero that enveloped all of them ridding them of those worthless Fraccion. It had actually surprised him that the Arrancar that he called his Fraccion were so weak. Niiro was now at a place where he was comfortable and he didn't feel like moving from this area. He could only wonder what the future would bring for him. It was possible that his life might be filled with joy, or pain, either way it would be one hell of a future.

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http://narutorevo.forumotions.net/the-basket-f2/konoha-lake-t1802.htm#9543
Me fighting against Kain.


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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:10 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:34 pm

Cuarta?
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:55 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:01 pm

If you want Cuarta, beef up your History a lil' bit. An easy way to do this is get rid of the cliche "no memories" and add something in. Also, be more descriptive with the voice. Deep doesn't explain much.
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:10 pm

Edited, and bump.
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Tue Oct 26, 2010 7:07 pm

Cuarta is reserved for someone.
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:56 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Wed Oct 27, 2010 3:02 pm

Nothing, I believe.
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Wed Oct 27, 2010 3:19 pm

Novena is.
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Wed Oct 27, 2010 3:26 pm

I'll take Novena then.
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:21 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Fri Oct 29, 2010 5:22 pm

More description on your appearance. A thorough description too. All that crap about being faster; remove it. If that means changing your shoes, gloves and poncho/cloak - then do it. Looking at the picture of your character, your gloves and shoes appear to be made out of steel - is it? Now, I would have known this if you gave a much more thorough description of your character's appearance.

For your likes, you mentioned family. Your character doesn't have a family, he's dead. Unless you were referring to fellow Espadas/Arrancars; if so, use the race name so as not to cause any confusion.

Your personality - you mentioned believing humans can "corrupt" the Arrancars, if they themselves become one. When a human becomes a hollow ... they become a hollow; not a corrupt human with abilities of a hollow. You yourself and your fellow Arrancars were once humans - most if not all. That doesn't make sense at all. Change it or place in something logical.

Shinigami. You are supposed to kill them.

Ugh . . .

Even though your history is just absolutely ludicrous, I have no problems with it.

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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Sat Oct 30, 2010 11:18 pm

There.... is that better?
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Tue Nov 02, 2010 2:46 pm

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into a hollow and was transferred over to Hueco Mundo.

So did FedEx deliver Niiro to Hueco Mundo? Hollows don't auto-transfer over to Hueco Mundo like purified pluses over to Rokungai.

Also, all Hollows don't start off as Adjuchas, they start off as Menos, transform into Menos Grande (like a taco), to Adjuchas, to Vasto Lorde. But only a rare few turn into Vasto Lordes.

Also, what was that thing in the Arrancar's pocket that turned Niiro into an Arrancar? Since a Hollow CAN turn into an Arrancar naturally.

Anyways, address these issues I have with the history.
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:10 pm

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Niiro Ryuu ~ Novena Espada   Sat Nov 06, 2010 8:27 am

A story of rags to riches eh? Anyways, seems plausible enough. Stamped.
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